Well Louis, for the amount of time I believe you have been playing you have developed a great swing. But two areas you need to improve are your posture and takeaway.
If you tilt forward too much over the ball at set-up your weight can get too much in your toes affecting your balance and power, so set up a little taller, slightly nearer the ball and sense your weight more in the middle of your feet.
When you take the club back initially, aim to feel the club shaft and hands work back a little straighter so the shaft is parallel to your 'toe line' when it reaches hip height. This will stop you taking the club 'inside' too soon.
Keep up the good work, maybe seeing another Frenchman on tour soon!
» You can upload a video of your swing and find out more about TG12 coach Adrian Fryer at www.adrianfryergolf.com.